Dear Mr. Jones:
We understand from your information posted on Alibaba.com that you are in the market for textiles. We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products, with the hope that we may work with Bright Ideas Imports in the future.
We are a joint venture specializing in the manufacture and export of textiles. We have enclosed our catalog, which introduces our company in detail and covers the main products we supply at present. You may also visit our online company introduction atHttp://xxxxxxxxxx.alibaba.com which includes our latest product line.
Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know. We will be happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirements.
We look forward to receiving your enquires soon.
Sincerely,
John Roberts
商務信函寫作要點
寫作商務信函并不要求您使用華麗優(yōu)美的詞句。所有您需要做的就是,用簡單樸實的語言,準確的表達自己的意思,讓對方可以非常清楚的了解您想說什么。圍繞這一點,我們總結了幾方面的內容,希望對您寫作商務信函有借鑒作用。
每一封信函的往來,都是您跟收信人彼此之間的一次交流。人都是感性的,所以您需要在您的信函里體現(xiàn)感性的一面。然而很多人都有一種誤解,以為寫作商務信函就應該用一種特殊的“生意腔”,于是把一封本來應該是熱情而友好的信函寫得呆板而死氣沉沉。他們寧愿寫“Your letter has been received”,“Your complaint is being looked into”而不是“I have received your letter”或者“We are looking into your complaint”。其實我們簡單的來理解一下,每次信函的往來不就是跟對方進行了一次交談嗎?只不過是把交談的內容寫到了紙上而已。多用一些簡單明了的語句,用我/我們做主語,這樣才能讓我們的信函讀起來熱情,友好,就象兩個朋友之間的談話那樣簡單,自然,人性化。